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I do not think that all of them are must included in ''Joker''. But, I guess, is it ok that Debra Kane the officer in 'cast' paragraph, and "bad day" sentence and TDK homage is described as ''[[Help:Footnotes|notes]]'' in 'Writing' paragraph, like notes in 'plot' paragraph at [[MCU]] film articles? It do not harm any portion, just adding new neutral information; at least, in 'Writing' paragraph, TDK also is added as motive film. [[User:Reiro|Reiro]] ([[User talk:Reiro|talk]]) 16:32, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
== Lots of poorly written sentences, and some awful ones. ==
Sorry, I don't have the time or inclination to rewrite any of this myself. I hope it will catch the eye of an interested editor.
The poorly written sentences that I found were in the Design/Set section:
"...said he established the filming location of Gotham Square in Newark as a film set because there was still '''poverty'''."
"that it is a '''more realistic name in the real world'''."
"'''The theater scene displays''' posters of Zorro, The Gay Blade and Excalibur, '''commonly found visual elements in other media when the parents of Bruce Wayne are dead''', including Batman v Superman: Dawn of Justice.'''; additionally''', the poster of Arthur, released in 1981, '''noticed a specific period in this film'''."
"The '''norm''' "Super Rat" in radio broadcast '''referred to''' Ratcatcher, one of '''the Batman villains'''..."
"'''Pogo's Comedy Club where Arthur played stand-up show''' is '''named after stage name''' of John Wayne Gacy, '''being notorious as "killer clown"'''."
"'''The billboard written "Ace in the hole"''', located '''on behind of clowns''' in the last scene, '''was from a''' line of '''Joker''' in The Dark Knight; "
I would hope everything I have marked above with a bold effect is obviously wrong to those reading this.
This list above is not necessarily exhaustive: I suggest looking at who added/edited the sentences I identified, and reviewing all of their edits (at the very least, on this page).
[[User:Ed10101|Ed10101]] ([[User talk:Ed10101|talk]]) 22:58, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
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