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::::I've removed it but we need to work in an explanation of antecedents including Tuscan opera. A lot of this article needs rewriting of course. It's not up to standard. - [[User:Kleinzach|Kleinzach]] 12:56, 11 June 2006 (UTC)
== General, sweeping edits ==
Hello guys. I'm rather new at this Wiki editing, but I noticed that much of this article was rather confusing and needlessly wordy. I've just edited some of the "History" subsection to make it more direct. My changes would be rather dramatic, but I don't want to be too aggressive without the approval of the Opera Buffa community here.
My proposal would be to go through on Sunday, and make big changes to most of the sentence structure throughout the article, and I would probably delete about 1/4 or 1/3 of the sentences here, since I don't think that they're adding much to the article. I'll post again to this Talk page with some examples if you would prefer that. Later in the week, I'll do some research into Grove and whatnot to try and add some more content back in.
Is this cool with everybody?
Thanks! With a little work, this page will be ship-shape in no time.
[[User:Jdauermann|Jdauermann]] 09:39, 13 August 2006 (UTC)Jdauermann
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