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:Your edits looked pretty good to me. [[User:Marc Shepherd|Marc Shepherd]] 13:25, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
::Removing the wordiness of this text is certainly a step in the right direction. If you can also review the content with Grove, that will be excellent. - [[User:Kleinzach|Kleinzach]] 14:16, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
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