User contributions for RyokoMocha
A user with 445 edits.
29 August 2024
- 20:4120:41, 29 August 2024 diff hist −7 The Sekhmet Hypothesis →Influence on comic book mythology: Changed "graphic novel" to story arc in the New X-Men comic book series. A graphic novel is a specific, self-contained one-shot comic story, it is not just a fancy term for all comic books to let pretentious people avoid calling them comic books. Some story arcs may be later re-published as trade paperbacks, but those are still not graphic novels. current Tags: 2017 wikitext editor Disambiguation links added
10 June 2024
- 03:4503:45, 10 June 2024 diff hist −2 Coltan →Ethics of mining in the Democratic Republic of Congo: Removed random unnecessary commas. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
4 June 2024
- 18:4518:45, 4 June 2024 diff hist −16 Nobility →Japan: Changed "some of the most decent and most powerful noble families of Japan" to simply "some of the most powerful." "Most decent" can't be judged and hardly belongs here. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
2 June 2024
- 01:2401:24, 2 June 2024 diff hist −10 Batman: Mask of the Phantasm →top: Changed "Batman: Year One graphic novel" to "[story] arc." "Graphic Novel" is not just a fancy term for comic books, and Batman: Year One was simply the story arc from Batman issues #404 - #407, not a graphic novel. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
31 May 2024
- 06:2106:21, 31 May 2024 diff hist +2 Pine Deep Trilogy →Premise: Changed "awoken" to awakened. current Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
31 March 2024
- 15:3915:39, 31 March 2024 diff hist +2 Tax on childlessness →Soviet Union Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
25 January 2024
- 02:1902:19, 25 January 2024 diff hist +12 Eye of Agamotto →Other versions: "Future Imperfect" was not a graphic novel, it was a comic book limited series. The term "Graphic Novel" is not just a fancy term for comic book, it refers to a specific type of self-contained, single issue comic book story, in contrast to the usual ongoing monthly serialized comic book format. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
25 December 2023
- 02:2602:26, 25 December 2023 diff hist −1 m Metal: Hellsinger →Gameplay: I changed "players are faced by a raiment of demons" to "players are faced by an array of demons," since the word raiment means a full set of formal clothing, and therefore the original sentence as it was just really didn't make much sense. While the idea of fighting a fancy suit made out of demons does actually sound kind of interesting and cool, it just isn't what happens in this game. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
18 November 2023
- 21:1121:11, 18 November 2023 diff hist −8 Monochrome monitor →CRT Design: Removed extraneous ", e.g.," from before "plasma screens." Tags: Reverted 2017 wikitext editor
17 August 2023
- 22:0422:04, 17 August 2023 diff hist +107 Technology in Star Trek →Modified warp scale (''The Next Generation'', ''Deep Space Nine'', ''Voyager'', and ''Picard'') Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 17:1417:14, 17 August 2023 diff hist −1 m Super-injunctions in English law →Criticism Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
16 August 2023
- 05:4205:42, 16 August 2023 diff hist +1,506 Talk:Traditional medicine →This: Reply Tag: Reply
- 04:3404:34, 16 August 2023 diff hist +451 Talk:Pacific College of Health and Science No edit summary Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 04:2404:24, 16 August 2023 diff hist +663 Talk:Traditional medicine No edit summary Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
22 July 2023
- 11:1811:18, 22 July 2023 diff hist +692 Talk:From Hell No edit summary Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
3 July 2023
- 07:3607:36, 3 July 2023 diff hist +204 Weapon X (story arc) →Plot: Changed "bond him to adamantium" to "bond adamantium [...] to his bones," and cleaned up details of claw installation. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
27 June 2023
- 17:5617:56, 27 June 2023 diff hist +6 Ghost soldiers →Russia: Cleaned up spelling and grammar mistakes Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
26 June 2023
- 10:0110:01, 26 June 2023 diff hist −28 Foreign aid to Pakistan →Corruption: Removed "as a result of corruption" which made it seem as if it were the US officials who were guilty of corruption, either deliberately or as a mistake. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
22 June 2023
- 02:2302:23, 22 June 2023 diff hist 0 m Reservoir Dogs →Plot Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
23 May 2023
- 04:5304:53, 23 May 2023 diff hist −5 Peter Venkman →''Ghostbusters: Afterlife'' (2021): Changed "electrocuted" to shocked; if Venkman had ever electrocuted any of his male students he would be a murderer and almost certainly be in prison. Electrocution means death by electricity. (electricity + execution) Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
16 May 2023
- 22:2222:22, 16 May 2023 diff hist −2 m Space Shuttle program →Background: Changed "twice as long than" to the proper "twice as long as." Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
27 April 2023
- 05:3805:38, 27 April 2023 diff hist +406 Talk:Slavophilia No edit summary Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
11 April 2023
- 04:5204:52, 11 April 2023 diff hist −1 m Adventure →Motivation Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 02:5902:59, 11 April 2023 diff hist +641 Mercenaries in popular culture →Board and card games: Corrected the description of BattleTech from "board game" to "tabletop wargame" and expanded the section Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
13 March 2023
- 03:4703:47, 13 March 2023 diff hist 0 m 1:285 scale →top: Changed "Battletech" to "BattleTech," because the official naming conventions of the game use CamelCase (or medial capitals) both for the real world name of the game itself, as well as for a large number of in-universe terms as well (For example; "BattleMech," "OmniMech," "MechWarrior," "DropShip," "JumpShip," "WarShip," etc.) It's not a really big deal, but it is the official spelling of the game so I just thought I'd clean it up while I was here. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
3 March 2023
- 18:2918:29, 3 March 2023 diff hist −3 Appleseed (1988 film) →Characters Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 18:2118:21, 3 March 2023 diff hist +4 m Appleseed (1988 film) →Characters: I changed "His name is mistranslated 'Bularios' in the English dub" to "His name was transliterated as 'Bularios' in the English dub." The change of the sounds of a name from one language to another is transliteration, not translation. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
28 February 2023
- 00:5900:59, 28 February 2023 diff hist +208 Kheshig →In popular culture: Added a description of the use of the term Keshik in the BattleTech tabletop wargame and military science fiction setting. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
14 February 2023
- 05:2005:20, 14 February 2023 diff hist −1 m Millstone →Symbolism in the Bible: Capitalized Bible. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
21 January 2023
- 04:3304:33, 21 January 2023 diff hist +2 MeToo movement →Silicon Valley: Changed the noun "misogynist" to the proper adjectival form "misogynistic." Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
27 October 2022
- 21:5421:54, 27 October 2022 diff hist +552 Talk:Mootness No edit summary Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
23 October 2022
- 04:3304:33, 23 October 2022 diff hist −3 Tommy Oliver →As the Green Ranger: Changed "dispatching of Zordon" to just "dispatching Zordon." You would "dispose of" someone, OR dispatch someone, but never "dispatch of" someone. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
2 October 2022
- 05:5005:50, 2 October 2022 diff hist +605 Talk:Melee (game terminology) →Why Specifically "Video Games?": new section Tag: New topic
23 August 2022
- 22:2622:26, 23 August 2022 diff hist −3,159 Talk:Landmark Worldwide →Tactics and Methods Tags: Manual revert 2017 wikitext editor
22 August 2022
- 23:4723:47, 22 August 2022 diff hist +2,860 Talk:Landmark Worldwide →Tactics and Methods: Reply Tags: Reverted Reply
19 August 2022
- 18:1518:15, 19 August 2022 diff hist 0 India's Daughter →Development: Changed the grammatically incorrect "enormous amounts of people" to the correct "enormous numbers of people." Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
19 July 2022
- 09:5209:52, 19 July 2022 diff hist 0 Internet culture →Negative: Changed "amount of disadvantages" to the proper "number of disadvantages." If a noun is non-countable, like "water" or "money," then you use "amount." But if a noun is countable, like "dollars" or "advantages," then you use "number," not "amount." Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
18 July 2022
- 06:1406:14, 18 July 2022 diff hist −182 Sell Out (Reel Big Fish song) I excised the line about the song being "interpreted as chronicling the payola scandals of early FM radio," as it a bizarre "interpretation" with no attribution. I also removed the following line about the song being "a satire of the way the pop music industry works in general," since even thought that interpretation of the song is correct, it also has no attribution. The first line was an example of the "Creeping Wikipedia Factoids" that spring up out of nowhere, and need to be guarded against. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 05:5705:57, 18 July 2022 diff hist +4,134 Talk:Sell Out (Reel Big Fish song) No edit summary Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
21 June 2022
- 14:0114:01, 21 June 2022 diff hist −2 Melee (game terminology) →History: Changed "Dungeons and Dragons" to "Dungeons & Dragons." D&D is correctly spelled with an ampersand, never the word "and." Oddly, it was already spelled correctly immediately beforehand. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
16 June 2022
- 05:0005:00, 16 June 2022 diff hist −3 Voltron: Defender of the Universe (video game) →Gameplay: Changed "dispatch of the villain" to just "dispatch the villain." Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
24 March 2022
- 10:2110:21, 24 March 2022 diff hist −2 Chick tract Corrected the spelling of Dungeons & Dragons from "Dungeons and Dragons." The name of the roleplaying game is properly spelled with an ampersand, never the word "and." Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
17 March 2022
- 03:4203:42, 17 March 2022 diff hist −1 m Death Wish 3 I also removed an unnecessary comma. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 03:4103:41, 17 March 2022 diff hist −7 Death Wish 3 Changed "popular horror director, Stanley Kubrik" to simply "popular director." His single Horror film The Shining hardly turned him into a "Horror director." Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 03:3803:38, 17 March 2022 diff hist +358 Talk:Death Wish 3 No edit summary Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
16 March 2022
- 23:3323:33, 16 March 2022 diff hist −3 Endless (comics) Changed the pretentious use of "graphic novel" to comic book. The term graphic novel refers to a specific format of self-contained, single issue, non-continuing comic book story, and is not simply a highbrow euphemism for comic books as a whole. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
12 March 2022
- 01:4801:48, 12 March 2022 diff hist +426 Belgarion No edit summary Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
7 March 2022
- 21:4421:44, 7 March 2022 diff hist +1,519 Talk:Sucker punch →What does "cold-cocked" mean? Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
18 January 2022
- 18:1218:12, 18 January 2022 diff hist +481 Talk:Kalifornia →Development section Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
1 December 2021
- 00:3400:34, 1 December 2021 diff hist −5 Jodi Benson Removed "both" before "voice of Ariel." Tags: Reverted 2017 wikitext editor
