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feel free to contact this user here! Hakoshu (talk) 16:39, 1 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello @Dxneo:, although I think sources are enough to establish notability of subject, but I will try to add more sources. please check out the article again. Hakoshu (talk) 19:08, 7 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Hakoshu, thank you for contributing to Wikipedia, which article was it? Please link it. dxneo (talk) 21:41, 7 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Fabrizio Costa, please check it out. Hakoshu (talk) 19:18, 10 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Andrea Bonaceto

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Hello @David Gerard, Thank you about your modification on the article. About 3 tags that you have added:

  1. If the article contains promotional context, please let me know to remove it. I have written article by myself according to the mentioned sources. Please remove promotional context and I will also do that if I can.
  2. If the article contains unreliable sources, please also remove them because I tried hard and chose them between nemoures sources. There is more sources to support Career section as you can find on Gnews.
  3. About [citation needed] that you have added in Exhibition section, I think for exhibitions the link of art gallery could be enough to demonstrate it was held by the artist. Also as I checked other articles, I saw all of Exhibitions are not sourced but I have sources most of exhibitions.
  4. About notability of subject, I suddenly saw a news on Al Jazeera about an artist an a robot and after a google search I took action to create it. Sources should establish notability of subject and I think it is so. thank you for your attention.

Hakoshu (talk) 19:25, 7 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@David Gerard please help me in this regards. Hakoshu (talk) 19:29, 10 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Sourcing looks better now - I just removed two more bad sources. Exhibitions should ideally be sourced to an independent reliable source, not just a primary source. I have seen editors remove lists of exhibitions on the basis that we don't do those here, though I can't find documentation of that. In general, genuine news coverage is better than press releases - David Gerard (talk) 19:42, 10 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
That′s right. I appreciate your effort in improving sources. I checked out the sources twice again and couldn't find bad sources. Hakoshu (talk) 20:24, 21 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]