User contributions for 66.91.24.128

8 August 2015

• 08:5908:59, 8 August 2015 diff hist −32‎ Shackleton (crater) ‎ less vague writing
• 06:3406:34, 8 August 2015 diff hist −2,027‎ User talk:66.91.24.128 ‎ Undid revision 675098905 by Aoidh (talk) grow up
• 06:3006:30, 8 August 2015 diff hist −6‎ GNU ‎ Undid revision 675037383 by Aoidh (talk) clearly, you haven't read the sources. they do not just verify the pronunciation. grow up and stop reverting for no reason.

7 August 2015

• 18:3718:37, 7 August 2015 diff hist −22‎ Stanley Miller ‎ →‎Publication problem: improved writing
• 18:3418:34, 7 August 2015 diff hist −34‎ Miller–Urey experiment ‎ not a useful link
• 18:1618:16, 7 August 2015 diff hist −351‎ Stanley Miller ‎ rm laughably pro-subject writing. NPOV is a core policy but seems to be very poorly understood.
• 18:0318:03, 7 August 2015 diff hist −14‎ Miller–Urey experiment ‎ not necessary
• 09:1809:18, 7 August 2015 diff hist −82‎ Peter Higgs ‎ Undid revision 668477930 by 89.74.78.26 (talk) we use our own words unless something can only be expressed as a quote. this is not one of those cases.
• 09:1609:16, 7 August 2015 diff hist −6‎ Dan Wheldon ‎ see MOS
• 09:1409:14, 7 August 2015 diff hist −220‎ Fauja Singh ‎ →‎Turbaned Tornado: rm promo copy
• 09:1209:12, 7 August 2015 diff hist −32‎ Pippa Haywood ‎ rm opinion and redundancy
• 09:0909:09, 7 August 2015 diff hist −7‎ David Felgate (tennis) ‎ poor writing
• 09:0009:00, 7 August 2015 diff hist −17‎ Ich bin ein Berliner ‎ →‎Jelly doughnut misconception: there is no need to emphasise the emphasis. Obviously, the emphasis was added. what else could someone possibly imagine?
• 08:5608:56, 7 August 2015 diff hist −17‎ Ich bin ein Berliner ‎ →‎Consequences and legacy: rm opinons
• 08:5508:55, 7 August 2015 diff hist −22‎ Ich bin ein Berliner ‎ rm opinions
• 08:5108:51, 7 August 2015 diff hist −59‎ List of multilingual presidents of the United States ‎ →‎Theodore Roosevelt: as fluency is not inherited, this is not a surprise and "despite" is entirely incorrect
• 08:4708:47, 7 August 2015 diff hist −6‎ GNU ‎ objectivity
• 08:4708:47, 7 August 2015 diff hist 0‎ GNU ‎ Undid revision 674948048 by Aoidh (talk) the sources verify facts presented in the whole sentence, not just in the first word. the appropriate place to put them is at the end of the sentence
• 08:4408:44, 7 August 2015 diff hist −55‎ Hualālai ‎ there is, in fact, a nice simple word which describes the concept of an active volcano not currently erupting.
• 08:4108:41, 7 August 2015 diff hist −336‎ Kohala (mountain) ‎ seems very obvious that when talking about the volcanoes that make up the island of hawaii, you don't include volcanoes separate from the island of hawaii. doesn't require any explanation.
• 05:4405:44, 7 August 2015 diff hist −85‎ Georg Cantor ‎ rm horrible abuses of the word "famous". see WP:PEACOCK. also referring to people by last name alone is unhelpful. use the full name on first mentions
• 05:3405:34, 7 August 2015 diff hist −104‎ The Beano ‎ rm subjective and unverifiable claims
• 05:2805:28, 7 August 2015 diff hist −699‎ Gina McKee ‎ rm huge swathes of appallingly bad hagiography
• 05:2005:20, 7 August 2015 diff hist −109‎ Axial Seamount ‎ →‎2011 eruption: rm improper external link, unnecessary brackets, unclear terminology
• 05:1405:14, 7 August 2015 diff hist −94‎ Paul Harris (Rotary) ‎ rm promotional tone and pov
• 05:1105:11, 7 August 2015 diff hist −32‎ John Profumo ‎ objectivity

6 August 2015

• 17:3217:32, 6 August 2015 diff hist −9‎ Caisson (engineering) ‎ →‎Dangers encountered in pressurized caissons: say things in one way. saying them twice in two different ways is not helpful at all.
• 09:3109:31, 6 August 2015 diff hist −10‎ Slaughter alley ‎ pov
• 09:3009:30, 6 August 2015 diff hist −245‎ Yungas Road ‎ →‎See also: irrelevant
• 06:2106:21, 6 August 2015 diff hist −9‎ Petrobras ‎ →‎Bolivian controversy: List formatting is for lists. If it's not a list, then obviously don't format it like one. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 August 2015

• 19:0419:04, 5 August 2015 diff hist −147‎ Suntory ‎ →‎History: basic errors: citations go after facts, don't use peacock words, don't use bold for random things, don't use a vague term and a specific term when you can just use the specific term
• 18:5818:58, 5 August 2015 diff hist −52‎ Suntory ‎ rm promo language which implied that it made some best selling and some award winning whiskeys, and which assumed that there was some logical sequence linking soft drinks to sandwich chains.
• 15:4915:49, 5 August 2015 diff hist −66‎ Paul Ginsparg ‎ rm opinion, and entirely tautologous description of him being a physicist known for doing physics.
• 15:4315:43, 5 August 2015 diff hist −462‎ Martin Durkin (director) ‎ rm incorrect bold, and false implication that what one journalist once said about one program of his is a generally held view
• 15:4015:40, 5 August 2015 diff hist −15‎ Phonolite ‎ rm unnecessary vagueness
• 15:3815:38, 5 August 2015 diff hist −33‎ Lara Pulver ‎ WP:PEACOCK
• 15:2915:29, 5 August 2015 diff hist +2‎ Decompression sickness ‎ women are not immune to this
• 04:2104:21, 5 August 2015 diff hist −346‎ Murder of Rhys Jones ‎ →‎Tributes and public reaction: rm irrelevant nonsense
• 04:1804:18, 5 August 2015 diff hist −65‎ SAM Coupé ‎ →‎Flash!: rm highly unlikely speculation
• 04:0904:09, 5 August 2015 diff hist −50‎ Westerlund 1 W26 ‎ Undid revision 674552050 by Tarlneustaedter (talk) your edit summary doesn't make sense, and this wording implies that the nature of the cluster has changed since it was discovered

4 August 2015

• 17:0717:07, 4 August 2015 diff hist −50‎ Westerlund 1 W26 ‎ Title of a paper is not a description. You should stop reverting with such immature edit summaries.
• 15:4715:47, 4 August 2015 diff hist −58‎ Westerlund 1 W26 ‎ nobody ever called it that, and I certainly didn't suggest that they did so your edit summary makes no sense. It's the title of his paper. He certainly didn't refer to it "only" by the title of his paper about it.
• 07:5007:50, 4 August 2015 diff hist −12‎ Kona District, Hawaii ‎ rm judgement
• 04:5204:52, 4 August 2015 diff hist −41‎ Westerlund 1 W26 ‎ →‎Discovery: that's what it was then and that's what it is now. best not to imply that it somehow changed its nature

3 August 2015

• 07:4507:45, 3 August 2015 diff hist −12‎ Walk and talk ‎ no more or less so than other techniques
• 07:4307:43, 3 August 2015 diff hist −10‎ Salvage ethnography ‎ is it impossible? do these attempts always fail? obviously not. the word is redundant.
• 07:3907:39, 3 August 2015 diff hist −19‎ Her (film) ‎ →‎Box office: rm unencyclopaedic abomination
• 06:5106:51, 3 August 2015 diff hist +2,857‎ Wikipedia talk:WikiProject UK Parliament constituencies ‎No edit summary

2 August 2015

• 21:3921:39, 2 August 2015 diff hist 0‎ Sher 25 ‎ citations before facts make no sense.
• 20:0520:05, 2 August 2015 diff hist +2,772‎ Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Politics of the United Kingdom ‎No edit summary