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Frin Oee Review[edit]
Hi, please offer reviews or suggestions on the article. Thanks. --FuzzMaster 01:45, 20 January 2007 (UTC)FuzzMaster
The article has been updated substantially, and I consider the writing to be complete. I encourage re-review. Pictures hopefully pending. --FuzzMaster 19:50, 10 February 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | Very funny, especially the "Behavior" section. |
| Concept: | 7 | There's a lot of potential in jocks, as there are in any minority group, and yes, jocks are minorities. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | The writing was well-done, aside from a few redundancies, like "sporting clothing" or hompohonous mistakes ("way --> weigh", etc.) Very nice vocabulary; this is one of the better zoological articles I've read. |
| Images: | 3 | More images are definitely in order. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | It could do without the quotes, and some fixing-up in the table |
| Final Score: | 31 | Great article. Just needs a little tidying up, if anything. |
| Reviewer: | --Señor DiZtheGreat  CUN AOTM ( Worship me!) (Praise me!) (Join me!) AMEN! 21:16, 22 January 2007 (UTC)
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Does anybody know about a certain Big Jock who Knew?